Student travel to study is overrated, we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really required for higher studies?
Higher studies have now become more popular among students. Often student prefers to travel for obtaining higher studies, primarily because some places provided more expertise on certain higher education sectors than local places from where they belong to. While some might disagree with the statement stated above. I believe, traveling to study is important for higher studies only when the higher studies are not been offered at their local place.
Every student has their preferences of subjects to study in order to complete higher studies and it is not always possible to have such options to study in local places because it might lack such institutes to deliver certain knowledge on those subjects. For example, my interest to study artificial intelligence as a subject to complete my higher studies was not been offered in any institute at my local place. Hence, I have left with no choice but to get an admission in Indian Institute of Technology which was far away from my home place in order to complete my higher studies.
Furthermore, it all depends on the local place one student belongs from. For example, if student belongs from an urban place he might get all facilities than that of a student belongs to the rural place, for him, he might have to travel to urban land in order to get opportunities. Not all places in the world can have the expertise in all types of higher education that a student wish to pursue. Though, one might argue for brilliant scholars that were found from local places. It is possible to have better opportunities given by the local places from where those brilliant scholars were found.
To conclude, it is the type of higher education that a student wants to pursue and also if such education is been provided at there local place or not. If not, one might need to travel for other places in order to obtain higher education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...local places from where they belong to. While some might disagree with the statement ...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: WAS_BEEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'was not' or 'has not been'?
Suggestion: was not; has not been
...a subject to complete my higher studies was not been offered in any institute at my local pl...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ded at there local place or not. If not, one might need to travel for other place...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 31.9359605911 166% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 322.0 242.827586207 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84161490683 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44991691648 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465838509317 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7478685886 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.357142857 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31540174081 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129914265336 0.0925447433944 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101291401148 0.071462118173 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208386398781 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855326827791 0.0609392437508 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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