A competitive environment in school and university would bring excellence and need to be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In Today's world where one can sense competition in every aspect of their life. It is necessary, from the beginning, to be ready for the competition that one might need to face. To begin with, schools and universities are perfect places where the competitive environment will allow students at their early stages to be ready for their future.While some might disagree from the above statement made.I believe, if such environment is encouraged then it would make student ready for the future.We will discuss further regarding the need for the competitive environment in school and universities.
Firstly, the competitive environment in schools and universities will allow students to be ready for the outside world. As we witnessed the competition in this world, from the jobs in the market to the products that are available, there is no doubt competition is everywhere and if one needs to survive in this world, one needs to compete. Schools and universities are the perfect places to have the competitive environment as it allows at the beginning stage of the life to be ready for the outside world.
Secondly, competition allows a student to do better than others thus productivity of a student improves each time. The competitive environment allows students in their school and universities to explore their potential to a great extent as they are forced to excel themselves in order to show their best in the competitive environment. This clearly states the reason one might excel if competitive environment is encouraged.
To conclude, encouraging a competitive environment in schools and universities will allow a student to reach for their full potential thus excelling in their life while making them ready for the outside world as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, no doubt, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20141342756 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01107761779 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434628975265 0.580463131201 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.589906305 50.4703680194 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.2 104.977214359 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.9669160288 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.25397266985 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300249563183 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146052509825 0.0925447433944 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592646502865 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202498320664 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422245295365 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 53.1260098522 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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