Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the advent of technological advancement, the computer is one of the most renowned inventions of all time. With the invention of the computers, many complex and hideous task that seems to be impossible to solve by the human has now taken up by the computers. But with that said, it has also made life more complex and stressful as well.In this essay, we will discuss the effect that computer has made in people's lifestyle.
Computers have helped in all sectors and field of work to solve a complex problem. For example, from solving complex mathematical problems to analyze data all these things were found to be a hideous task which is now solved efficiently by computers. Nowadays it has helped to boost the development of human society at the higher pace. Computers have now been an integral part of human society and due to that undoubtedly it has supported human to solve the problem.
Nevertheless, though computers have proven to be advantageous for human in all aspect, it has also caused the health problem in humans due to prolong usage which led to stressful life. Furthermore, it has also introduced more complex life to deal with. For example, spending more time with the computer has led to degradation of social behavior thus giving rise to complex life, also due to harmful radiation from prolonged use of the computer as caused health issue leading to stress full life. These show the effect what computers have made in human lifestyle that one cannot ignore.
In my opinion, computers have done more good than bad for humans in order to achieve betterment in human society. As computers have solved more complex problem than created one.I believe computers have made our life easier than ever before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9180887372 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57784712698 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498293515358 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2625801167 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304052324406 0.242375264174 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126527508632 0.0925447433944 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916668350633 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205397931681 0.151781067708 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771428119094 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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