Over the past few decades, there has been a high degree of the ambivalence over this matter, whether the computers have made our life easy and convenient. Whereas some people say computer had made our life more stressful, I sanguinely believe that computer helps us in our daily life. This essay will further discuss reasons to support this notion and then deduce a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriads of reasons to support this notion, but one of the most compelling reason is that the computer enables anywhere access. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the students who used the computer for the study performed better than others. Thus, the beneficial ramification of using computer apparently can be seen.
On the contrary, skeptics conjecture that people now spend more time on computers than with friends, which makes life more difficult and stressful. Although it seems ostensibly veridical, this is the one-sided story. As a tangible example, researchers from a reputed organization conducted research, which disclosed the benefits of computers. Hence, this is correct to presume a preconceived notion of skeptics.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments from both the sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of the computer far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the benefits of computer prove its significance, but also pinpoints the implication in the life without a computer.
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...reputed organization conducted research, which disclosed the benefits of computer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, so, then, thus, whereas, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88559641438 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641666666667 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6152675621 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309388271481 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961559279866 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104971176164 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164225040311 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983576165062 0.0609392437508 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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