Over the few decades, there has been an increase in the problem of the work-life balance. People would spend too much time on the work than their personal life and would experience time shortage. This has stimulated elicited disputation among the public. This essay will further discuss the issue in details and then deduce a logical conclusion.
Nowadays, human dependency on the money start from their birth, this situation is widely spread. A normal person would buy the house by taking the loan from the bank, and they would have to pay the EMI for the repayment of the loan for almost all of their lifetime. The same problem arises when the student has to take the loan for the higher studies, and the burden to make the good amount of money start with this loan. The problem doesn't stop here, living in the metro cities is becoming more and more expensive every day. People need to pay for expensive transport system or they have the option to opt for a bank loan to buy a new car.
To conclude further, due to all the expenditure occurred in their personal life people are forced to do the job till extra hours. the problem is widespread in metro cities. which cost the human with various type of illness and is very harmful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61538461538 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21079508632 2.71678728327 81% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58371040724 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3021678591 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 7.25397266985 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269987597321 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912465455681 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120199500064 0.071462118173 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188655039709 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104013523674 0.0609392437508 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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