Over the past few decades, there has been a high degree of ambivalence over this matter whether extreme sports like skiing, water rafting etc should be prohibited. This has elicited stimulated disputation among the public. Whereas some people say that these games should be banned, I believe that these extreme sports should not be banned. This essay will further elaborate reasons to support this notion and then deduce a logical conclusion.
At the outset, There are myriads of reasons to support this notion but one of the most compelling reason is that even though the extreme sports are dangerous but if done under professional supervision it can help one builds self-confidence. Another cogent reason is that sports keep people healthy. hence, participation in the extreme support should not be prohibited.
On the contrary, there are skeptics who conjecture that extreme sports should be banned, as several death cases have been reported of people who participated in the extreme sports. Although it seems ostensibly veridical this is not the case, as in most death cases it was found that people participated in these sports without a professional supervision.
After analyzing the above facts I would like to recapitulate that, extreme sports could be dangerous if performed in absence of a professional, but they can be beneficial if performed under the professional supervision, hence the extreme sports should not be prohibited.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...son is that sports keep people healthy. hence, participation in the extreme support s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, whereas, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33187772926 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8865850974 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53711790393 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2134818697 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.1 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347072085496 0.242375264174 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14399383019 0.0925447433944 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118621646653 0.071462118173 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221414205889 0.151781067708 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651795682223 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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