A study needs time, peace and comfort, whereas employment needs the same thing. Someone says it is impossible to combine those two because one distracts one another. Do you think this is realistic in our life today?
Although such topic will never yield a consensual agreement, a dialogue on study and employment needs time can lead to thought-provoking discussion. my view is that irrespective of numerous argument that exist on either sides, study needs time peace and comfort whereas consequently employment needs the same thing which is partially considerable. through this essay i shall consider both the sides and it will be paraphrased in this essay.
In order to say that there are many advantages, study and employment needs the same time and it can save time. instead of seeing work as a burden we should look that they are time management which pays us for our daily needs and the study gives us more knowledge so we can peruse with them, we should all try to balance both so we come know that we are in-dependent. nowadays many people are giving importance to studies as they work by doing correspondent courses which can manage both equally as we are experienced and aged enough.
There are some disadvantages to also be considered, many youngsters are capable or have not learnt that much to manage both equally, as in these days they find to fetch what to study and they feel stress in that way and they cannot manage to be a worker in company. as we see they are struggling their parents should advice them to focus first on their studies and then after few year when they find they can manage then they can work
Finally, there are many advantages like doing their corespodent courses where they can have only weak end classes eventually disadvantages also been considered as youmgsters they develop their skills first which is a basement need for a person to achieve by guidance's of parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, look, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 20.9802955665 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80887372014 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69382965149 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552901023891 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5024630542 176% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.069928172 50.4703680194 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.125 104.977214359 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.625 20.9669160288 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165740125266 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103943827712 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944349793091 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109925230073 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911724447917 0.0609392437508 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 12.6369458128 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.3980295567 158% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.