Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not?

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Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not?

Submitted by Alirexa66 on Sat, 09/01/2018 - 04:47

Many young people are usually looking for a rule model among the famous stars around them. There could be pros and cons which are debatable and some considerations that should be taken by parents. This essay will explain that through the paragraphs below.
To begin with, lots of movie stars or sport champions were such a hard worker that it could be useful to know how they have fulfilled their dreams and what they have done for their achievements particularly. It can contribute to motivation of youngsters to try more for gaining successes. If they focus on efforts and obstacles of them, they will be wisely capable of planning for the future. Besides, following the successful stars like sport champions can improve the general health status of society.
On the other hand, it has taken its toll on adolescences in some cases. Sometimes the truth about stars is different from what is shown in media. For instance, many of them suffer from ethical disorders or harmful addictions. This may lead the young fans to being exposed to risk and arouse a concern for parents..
As expressed, following a star as a role model could have benefits. Although, it’s of importance to young people to find the stars who put the positive impacts on their life and the people around them, it must be recognized by parents that to what extent they are able or talented in that way.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...to risk and arouse a concern for parents.. As expressed, following a star as a ro...
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Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... the positive impacts on their life and the people around them, it must be recognized by parents that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, may, so, for instance, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79831932773 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52362609194 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605042016807 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9183125821 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8461538462 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222328549108 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790503053654 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742392924956 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130512882047 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309173716999 0.0609392437508 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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