Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not?
Recently, the phenomenon of looking for a rule model and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of imitation is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the scrutiny of positive characteristics can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, The most frequently stressed cause is that lots of movie stars or sport champions have been such a hard worker that it could be useful to know how they have fulfilled their dreams and what they have done for their achievements particularly. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I conducted an academic experiment which discovered motivation of youngsters to try more for gaining successes. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both being wisely capable of planning and improving general health status apparently can be seen.
On the other hand, it has taken its toll on adolescences in some cases. Sometimes the truth about stars is different from what is shown in media. For instance, many of them suffer from ethical disorders or harmful addictions. This may lead the young fans to being exposed to risk and arouse a concern for parents..
As expressed, I profoundly believe that the benefits of finding impressive ethical features far outweigh its drawbacks Although, it’s of importance to young people to find the stars who put the positive impacts on their life and the people around them, it must be recognized by parents that to what extent they are able or talented in that way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...to risk and arouse a concern for parents.. As expressed, I profoundly believe tha...
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Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... the positive impacts on their life and the people around them, it must be recognized by parents that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, look, may, so, thus, for instance, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07664233577 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94250452665 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638686131387 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.9372958404 50.4703680194 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.454545455 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11836033842 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399264793171 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369304793098 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658586480273 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224435056368 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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