Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model of youngsters. Do you support it or not. Agree or disagree?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day revels that celebrities are a role model of youngsters has been one of the prominent topic in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain the life of a film star. Regarding this I would say I am totally agreed with this statement.
To commence with, celebrities are biggest role model for youngsters and fans also. Youngsters get motivated from successful sports person. How he or she achieve the goals to being successful in their life. Many versatile film stars also make movies of sportsman life and motivate us. Most of the movies are for general knowledge and many of them are about history. Most of the history is not known in the world, to elaborate the history they make movies and give new knowledge to youngsters and people.
Probing further, there are many examples of famous sports man and film stars like a famous sports man Virat Kohli, Reynaldo etc and famous movie star Amir Khan and Amitabh Bachan are the biggest example. Celebrity’s life story gives new way to their fans and active their dreams. Celebrities also involve in social welfare program.
To conclude, I would say if these stars were not there we will never get entertain and motivational stories of these people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the biggest'.
Suggestion: are the biggest
...atement. To commence with, celebrities are biggest role model for youngsters and fans also...
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Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...gest role model for youngsters and fans also. Youngsters get motivated from successf...
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Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...oungsters get motivated from successful sports person. How he or she achieve the goals...
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Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'achieves'.
Suggestion: achieves
...successful sports person. How he or she achieve the goals to being successful in their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91845493562 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61217949931 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583690987124 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6163846266 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8571428571 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 7.25397266985 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192169167861 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586223842027 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545380251075 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106291161736 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248521013142 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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