In the past decade, we have witnessed many marvelous inventions. Its called the era of inventions due to massive innovations in the area of medicine, transportations, and information technology. Proponents are debating over the advantages and disadvantages of this inventions. Many argue that all this enormous have made human life more comfortable and liveable, however, others have opposite views stating that it has led to many detrimental impacts.
Let’s begin with paramount benefits of inventions, we can hardly imagine our life and evolution of mankind without all these new inventions. It has made a world better place and societies can now collaborate on a global platform for sharing greatest ideas. For instance, due to massive inventions in the fields of information technology, we can store, retrieve and share a large amount of data easily. Due to the advancement in software, we can manage large inventories and financial details in a single click. Furthermore, mundane and repetitive tasks are replaced by artificial intelligence, machine learning, and robotics, so that we can do productive work. On the other hand, there are many downsides of such inventions. People are leading a sedentary lifestyle, reduced physical activities. For example, a large part of people is suffering from severe diseases like memory loss and psychological problems.
In conclusion, from the above example, it is evident that among all the inventions, the finding of computers and the internet is best and superior.
- Talk about the pros/cons of this era as is full of daily invention. Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society. 11
- Technological inventions come out on a daily basis. Take one example and discuss its advantage and disadvantage to individual and society. 88
- Companies should pay attention to reputation and branding or special sales and discount? Do you agree or disagree? 85
- There is no need for newspapers in modern world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 85
- the Information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and had some negative and positive effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45762711864 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14994425472 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622881355932 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2235464548 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0769230769 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0438764503546 0.242375264174 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0154053699185 0.0925447433944 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247022307967 0.071462118173 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0300404984473 0.151781067708 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359621922257 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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