Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behaviour. If sporting events cause antisocial behaviour, can team sports really be good for us?
Team sports are usually keeps the plays physically strong and fit and build character. the sports events like soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior. In my opinion there are many advantages by the team sports.
Firstly, team sports generate the good environment in the team as they should play with with others. some games like rubbery and soccer will have some antisocial behavior, but not in all team games. For example, soprters like single team who attends sporting events are able to share the joy together when their team wins. Although I do not deny that violence are occasionally involved, it is possible to resolve it.
Secondly, team are used for the commercial advertisements as the team sports have huge fans. for instance, the team game like cricket are used by different companies for promoting there products. not only the top companies, the food vendors near to the events will also profitable for selling the food. these sport person are also become a celebrity these days.
By this it can be concluded that the team sports will have some antisocial behavior to keep this a side, there are many positives by these type of sports and there will be some violence in some sports but not in all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92660550459 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46480145071 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564220183486 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4743235816 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386368008238 0.242375264174 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145592954475 0.0925447433944 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141589696357 0.071462118173 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268417006924 0.151781067708 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165309033132 0.0609392437508 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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