Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character.However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior.If sporting events antisocial behavior, can team sports be really good for us?
For mass and media, sports events are quite interesting and beneficial as it leads to debates. While to some it leads to antisocial behavior.According to me, sports events are good for everyone.After all, everything has some drawbacks. The thing which is important to care for is that are these drawbacks having any harmful impacts or are they under our control or not.
Sports events are quite good for maintaining a healthy body and hence a healthy mind. Moreover, it also gives the people a platform to display their talent to the world and earn something for themselves and their family. There are many people who consider these players as their idols and get encouragement. The people today are so busy that they do not have any time for exercise.But these sports events encourage them to go for playing which in turn is quite beneficial for their body.Moreover, it also develops team spirit among people. There have been incidents that the fans have become so involved in the matches that they started being rude with the rivals. This resulted in violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior.But these things can be controlled.The team players should explain to people that winning and losing are the essential part of a match and people should behave rather sensibly.
Hence, the importance of sports events outweighs the drawbacks. So, sports events should be promoted and should be given full importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, moreover, so, while, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08403361345 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7845574743 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567226890756 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6831412734 50.4703680194 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236326639715 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096685668093 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746141257538 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1787199483 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246769532933 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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