Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to
There can be many factors behind a successful person but upbringing and surrounding are main factors with which person can make his journey easy and successful. We will discuss both positive and negative influences of regions on any person growth.
To start with, a person who live in good society and attend proper schooling in his or her early days can be assured to get into right path and become successful in his life. Environment and native places play a key role in bringing out confidence, patience and fighting skills in any person. Native place also play a vital role in defining the attitude of a person for example one who lives in village on his early days and then move to metro cities , can handle things much easier and confidently than who lives in metro cities and due to any reason has to move to rural areas.
On other side spending times in different regions with different communities and different type of people definitely nourish leadership quality of person and confidence to lead groups of people. Mahatma Gandhi who was great Indian leader is an example who travelled a lot and spent time among number of communities and groups and finally lead the India to Freedom.
To conclude, regions can be one factor like many others to make a person successful but definitely can not be only thing with which a person can become successful.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'as to', 'for example', 'in fact', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266129032258 0.268076937826 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.137096774194 0.116061578633 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.129032258065 0.0759168565197 170% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0322580645161 0.0366838410393 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0241935483871 0.0131127313244 185% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112903225806 0.155750635184 72% => OK
Participles: 0.0201612903226 0.0379272487307 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50499332202 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0403225806452 0.0210936926555 191% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00403225806452 0.00175180941692 230% => OK
Determiners: 0.0604838709677 0.0948980150116 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0322580645161 0.00437022459523 738% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0282258064516 0.00967000014798 292% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1425.0 1161.00487805 123% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.9 120% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01265822785 5.90752243213 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73763899035 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354430379747 0.337110787985 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.215189873418 0.247514529752 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135021097046 0.171178102325 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0970464135021 0.112407865282 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50499332202 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573839662447 0.546246751206 105% => OK
Word variations: 56.5239471384 49.3433353143 115% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 29.625 23.0094962315 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7675485575 42.9750493124 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.125 135.714022679 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.625 23.0094962315 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.689975730869 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.48048780488 338% => OK
Readability: 51.1439873418 47.7609492067 107% => OK
Elegance: 2.0625 2.94281807926 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260005050671 0.418131533498 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118045686866 0.181151798455 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0741612492121 0.0850326197045 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.733483315531 0.706616315825 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145176768168 0.157042692854 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13211778862 0.228904883108 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359559139575 0.108899403657 33% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.203161288028 0.367819155151 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0949800480203 0.0812612215331 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176091493507 0.316326947829 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239594530816 0.0921553760075 26% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70731707317 216% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.16585365854 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.