Technological access to online music should be free or paid what do you think?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge In no of people have become a high level singer with the help of online music like you tube, speak songs capture video so many methods. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that online music helps many struggling singer and composes to learn pre recorded music in small ages can not only contribute to in music industry some singers live a good life with the help online music. Singer life is very struggle full but also leads to numerous others. Thanks to the wide range of advantages its offers, not only can one benefits more when its comes to being effective , but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one is good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned
In view of the arguments outlined above one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of online music should be free he help to poor singer and famous in world are indeed too great to ignore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62978723404 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45262495029 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604255319149 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.1179636068 50.4703680194 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.428571429 104.977214359 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5714285714 20.9669160288 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157803752506 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060865801986 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559998871689 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115742442416 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381319450003 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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