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In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for the products which lighten or whiten people skin out line the reasons for using such product and discuss what effects they have in terms of health society ?

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 1207.87684729 73% => OK
No of words: 175.0 242.827586207 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05714285714 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.92707691288 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85481293764 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 379.143842365 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.5024630542 210% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9831703535 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 221.25 104.977214359 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.75 20.9669160288 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266977638184 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153701760994 0.0925447433944 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119294027829 0.071462118173 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153701760994 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119294027829 0.0609392437508 196% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 12.6369458128 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 53.1260098522 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.9458128079 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.3980295567 185% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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