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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 10.5418719212 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 8.36945812808 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 20.9802955665 14% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 31.9359605911 0% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.6985645933 5.00649968141 134% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.17962167785 2.71678728327 191% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 139.433497537 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.937799043062 0.580463131201 162% => OK
syllable_count: 180.0 379.143842365 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 0.9 1.57093596059 57% => Avg_syllables_per_word is low.

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6551724138 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 209.0 20.5024630542 1019% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 50.4703680194 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1400.0 104.977214359 1334% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 209.0 20.9669160288 997% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.33497536946 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.242375264174 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0925447433944 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151781067708 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 114.6 12.6369458128 907% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -81.44 53.1260098522 -153% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 76.5 10.9458128079 699% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 23.06 11.5310837438 200% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.55 8.32886699507 211% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.94827586207 573% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 85.6 10.3980295567 823% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.5123152709 542% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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