Advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A typical day revels how technology have changed the lives of humans has been one of the prominent topic in the contemporary discussions. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain its pros and cons for our society.
To begin with, knowledge and science have changed the way of living. Different inventions have their own advantages and disadvantages. Moreover, new inventions have made our life smooth and enjoyful. Best inventions of current generation are antibiotics, internet, airplanes and many more. Scientist new inventions and technology is giving us way to the different life and new technology.
Probing further, everything has its advantages and disadvantages. Even tough today our science is very advance but our technology and inventions have many disadvantages which is affecting our life and earth. Cars and airplanes are causing air pollution and depleting ozone layer of the earth’s crust. Uses of chemical fertilizers in crops and food have resulted in the generation of new diseases.
In conclusion, I would say we need technology and new inventions also but humans don’t know how to use this technology. Science will never stop it and will continuously going further and do new inventions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...have made our life smooth and enjoyful. Best inventions of current generation are an...
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Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...ill never stop it and will continuously going further and do new inventions.
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Line 4, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly going further and do new inventions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34597156398 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04856139122 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578199052133 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4553946304 50.4703680194 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.5714285714 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177878425109 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626510089288 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045903867868 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104367914063 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045938880908 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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