personal development is the base for professional development. to what extent do you agree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s of world is a colossal upsurge in personal development base for professional development. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are number of arguments favor of my stance. The most preponderant one in that help to improve talent and potential of an individual can not only contribute to change a behavior, represent self and so on teach. But also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience needless, to say all these merits stand one is good stead, as far arguments their chances of prosperity and excellencies concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a systems, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility dedication or perseverance hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of my opinion personal development change a style of person.
In the view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of personal development important for us, change life, change style of speak, eating and so on are indeed to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a system' or simply 'systems'?
Suggestion: a system; systems
...as. Besides, only when one follows such a systems, can they broaden their horizons, thus ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92941176471 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87610099608 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572549019608 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.3569688119 50.4703680194 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.7 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129813800131 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541468897545 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926242291801 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913123684847 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696987569071 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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