Technology allows us to have a useful and interesting life than in the past. Do you agree or disagree?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation on how technology has affected human life. While some people argue that technology has adversely affected human life, on my point of view technology allows us to have a useful and interesting life than in the past. In this essay, I shall discuss factors strengthening my argument while analyzing both sides of it.
First and foremost, there are myriad of advantages such as improving confidentiality, security together with convienience. For instance, internet has helped students to continue with their studies and lecturers can deliver their lectures through internet. In addition, information technology has made a revolution in modern world since, it is used in each and every sector in this world. Moreover, technology has improved the ways of entertainment and it has saved human time in domestic issues by the way of sophisticated equipment.
On the other hand, some people use technology for illegal activities which is a misuse. For example, information technology can be used for financial crimes and technology can be use for robberies as well. Besides that, technology has made human beings less activate because most of the processes are automated in the modern context.
In conclusion it is recommended to, impose laws to mitigate the impact of cyber crimes by the government. Apart from that, if governments can allocate more funds on technological experiments population of that country can benefit from that initiative. Finally, technology is a weapon which can be used for the betterment or destruction of the society.
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| 2019-09-17 | baljinder85 | 77 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32015810277 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05689256709 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600790513834 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.2373908036 50.4703680194 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.538461538 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8461538462 7.25397266985 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232967524914 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790398939094 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115238770073 0.071462118173 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136455972725 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100372432632 0.0609392437508 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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