Teenages should recieve lessons on principles of personal finance such as investing and debt. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals that teenagers is the golden period of life due to learning good skills one of the prominent topic in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyzed about this aforementioned statement. this essay is trying to check elaborate my views before arriving at a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that if teenagers learn the importance of saving money and investing in hight school, it will encourage them to start using widely loans and credit cards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 31.9359605911 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 608.0 1207.87684729 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 118.0 242.827586207 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15254237288 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.29587325169 3.92707691288 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7567784887 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 139.433497537 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.754237288136 0.580463131201 130% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 379.143842365 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3639697703 50.4703680194 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.6 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 7.25397266985 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0883046629057 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413831347495 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280138461264 0.071462118173 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652230466886 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.000591370898377 0.0609392437508 1% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 55.0591133005 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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