Television has many useful functions to play in everyone's life, for some, it's relaxation, for some, it is the companion. Discuss your viewpoint and support your answer with examples and discussion point.
Once 'idiot box,' televisions have come a long way to take up their new avatar of 'smart TVs.' Indeed, there could be one reason behind calling it an idiot box, but today, there are many reasons why we don't just label as a smart TV, but also a companion. 'Life is not all beer and skittles,' and each one of us has a lot to do in routine. While stress, depression, and work pressure are unavoidable for most, television comes as a rescue to your boredom and agony.
Today, televisions offer a myriad of entertainments ranging from the world famous series to internationally acclaimed and award winning movies, and from adrenaline-pumping sports to the news with added spices! It is beyond any question that with hundreds of satellite channels that too in HD, televisions leave no stone unturned to entertain people from all walks of life.
For some, it is a companion. Why shouldn't it be? After all, the smart TV allows you to access the Internet and thus brings your cyber world on a bigger screen. Many vacation-lovers depend on travel channels to choose their next destination; fitness freaks plan their workout as shown on the fitness channels, and children can be settled on cartoons for long!
Televisions have the capacity to engage anyone of any age; it has content for everyone. With the Internet connection on your smart TV, you don't need to depend on other gadgets or sources. I can conclude that it can be a true companion for each one of us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6953125 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76017957905 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61328125 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.931034482759 644% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.65917628 50.4703680194 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.2 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186824507489 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920530883944 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991314465832 0.071462118173 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110713174214 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329532397851 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.1260098522 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.