Television has two roles: to inform and to entertain. Explain which of these roles you see as more important.
Today's competitive world, there are lot of medium for entertain and news update in different regions of this world. Inspite of many flashing news and entraintent gadgets,TV has still preponderant role in our societies. Peoples believe that TV provides latest information and entertain the audiences. I reckon the notion that TV has important aspect our life which provide not only informations but entertain us. I will discuss both pivotal role and will give conclusion.
Firstly, there are numerous news and entertainment channel with service proviers which provide all these required information and updates on daily events. For example news channel CNN, BBC etc in news update and Laugh programs such as funniest video of America etc. Importance of TV is still exists as it provides accessibility and durability through out our daily life. In addition, the onus goes to audiences which channel they prefer to watch. Some audience like news tunning always and some people are tuned to entertainment channels.
Secondly, TV has attracted audiences since inventions inspite of availablity of multiple gadgets. People are bounded to their heros via medium such bollywood and hollywood. TV broadcast some programs which provide knowlege and current affaris throught out the worlds. It provides mirror of our societies of different regions and passes information to audience seating on other corner of this world. TV provide programs for children such as cartoon network. TV plays a huge role of second teacher for societies.
In recapitulate, People are bounded with TV in such a way that they could not live without it. I would recommend usage for watching TV should be limit to overcome the eye-sight problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...commend usage for watching TV should be limit to overcome the eye-sight problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, i reckon, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30147058824 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77512897546 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2586618806 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.1111111111 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116530282026 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415933790112 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463039209483 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718378531376 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536568202602 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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