In today’s era, the television has great influence on the society and it is an integral part of every household. People start their day with the television and spend sufficient amount of time in front of it. It provides a wide range of programs from education to entertainment catering children, adults, women and old age people. In this essay, I will put my thoughts on television and its impacts on the society.
To begin with, the idiot box, aka television, has changed the way we live in today’s time-frame. Our habits and personalities are continuously changing after watching programs. Today, people adjust their daily routine as per the information telecast on the television. For example, in Melbourne, people adjust their travel plan after watching weather prediction on the television. Same way, in India most of the women adjust their daily household activities to watch their favourite daily programs.
Furthermore, despite above beneficial features, it has negative impacts as well. Some people suggest that crime rate is going up because of the crime related programs constantly telecast on the television. People spend more time in front of the television and wasting productive time and energy. It has been noticed that kids are spending more time in front of the TV watching cartoon channels than in the playground and it is resulting to the obesity and other health issues.
To conclude, according to the preceding discussion, the television has positive and negative impacts on the society and it is our responsibility to take only positive changes and discard the negative ones for the betterment of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s for the betterment of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, well, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2641509434 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90254672674 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554716981132 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3907960746 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18825020245 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647372766508 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866298362412 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130480346078 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110828341194 0.0609392437508 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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