There are social medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phone do you agree that the problems out weigh the benefits of the mobile phone.
The importance of mobile phone which has always been debatable has now upsvTrged a lot of arguments in favor and against it thus it has become even more controversial the substantial influence has sparked the controversy over the potential of this trend in an integral part of the society community educational individual in recent years .it can be agreed that upside of is instrumental indeed however it has some various drawbacks as well this easy will be elaborate both assertion and will be provide to a well weighted conclusion .
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The above presented dissertation illustrates both perspectives about the impact of mobile phone while it is evident that is has various benefit although its deleterious effects cannot be ignored and have to be addressed and well balanced against its merits.?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84681439466 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58547008547 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 12.6551724138 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 78.0 20.5024630542 380% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.95469296 50.4703680194 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 402.0 104.977214359 383% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 78.0 20.9669160288 372% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.3333333333 7.25397266985 418% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179371860777 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126626486791 0.0925447433944 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421110159168 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114169724947 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326623578616 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.8 12.6369458128 331% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -16.15 53.1260098522 -30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.54236453202 261% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 10.9458128079 319% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.89 8.32886699507 143% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.94827586207 297% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.2 10.3980295567 319% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.5123152709 285% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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