There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?
The importance of there are social medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones which has been debatable has some upsurged a lots of arguments in favor and against. Thud it has become even more controversial. Tyre substantial influence of there are some, medical and technology problems assassinated with the use of mobile phone has sparked the controversy over the potential of this trends in an integral part of the society in recent years. It can be agreed that upside of there are social medical and technology problems associated with the use of mobile phone is instruments indeed. However , it has various drawback as well. This easy will be elaborate both assertion and will provide to a well-weighted conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons. Why the people easily communicate to another people with the help of mobile phone is unreservedly, salient, but the most conspicuous one lies fact that the students more knowledge with study in different language. Therefore , it is clearly vital if we are free we can play online games with the help of mobile phone time for people appreciate the significance of without any problem we can book online tickets it is easy way of travelling.
The above presented dissertation illustrates both impact perspectives about the impact of benefits of mobile phones, while it is evident that it is has various benefits, although its deleterious effect cannot be ignored and have to be addressed and will balanced against it merits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12096774194 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8694553607 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.3388672615 50.4703680194 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402561783735 0.242375264174 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141379094893 0.0925447433944 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161537695313 0.071462118173 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220905468722 0.151781067708 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144644971515 0.0609392437508 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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