One of the most conspicuous trends in today’s world is a colossal upsurge, is many people can take benefits from large shopping malls and save their time while doing shopping. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life, but I do entirely accept this concept and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that small shopping shops will convert into large shopping malls, which can provide ease in people's daily life. They can easily buy mostly things from one place and also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to a wide range of advantages being offered by changing small shops into large shopping malls, which provide more than one benefits when it comes to being effective and they can also enhance the productivity and standard of their life with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of a better life is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system can one broaden their horizons, learning such essential attributes as responsibilities, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of small local shops should replace into large shopping malls.
In view of these arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of converting small shops into large shopping malls in town and cites are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90714285714 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58625684915 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560714285714 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.273026315 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.909090909 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.25397266985 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268387598546 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111543672249 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133063065805 0.071462118173 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18172371092 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510321131349 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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