Travel to study is over rated, we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really required for higher studies? Statement Explain?
Foreign eduction has become quite a trend now in many countries, particularly youngsters who are in developing nations like India, Bangladesh and China are preferring to travel abroad for their higher education. Some people who follows this trend believe that study in abroad is very much necessary to become a great scientist or a scholar, on the other side some people have the opposite view. In my opinion, I support the later and think abroad education is bit overrated and it it not necessary to excel in any field or profession.
To begin with, lot of people are in opinion that education system in country they stay is not advanced and might not give them ample of opportunities to succeed in their career but this perspective is completely wrong as we have seen profound mathematician like Srininvasa Ramunjam had education in the regional college and still excelled in his field. Not only this we have many people like Adbul Kalam, Ratan Tata who have studied in their country and have reached heights in their respective fields.
Additionally, some people also think studying in regional colleges will not give them to exposure to and progress of the world on the other side. This might be true in early days but with the changing world of sharing information it is now always easy to get exposure to major inventions or discoveries on the other side of the world.
Although foreign education has its own share of benefits to an extent in terms of exploring a different culture however it is not needed to travel for higher studies to become a successful entrepreneur, scientist or scholar.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90476190476 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69862208371 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.5024630542 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.810782282 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.375 104.977214359 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.125 20.9669160288 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211357061059 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091939864709 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724714359703 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130096639284 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559927578741 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 12.6369458128 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.3980295567 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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