Write about Climate change? Who is responsible whether Government or industries? Why ?
It is irrefutable to say the changing climate is a major concern across the world in both developed and developing nations. There is an ongoing debate that the government should be held accountable for climate change, but on the other side of argument says that the industries should who cause the pollution should be held answerable. In my opinion, the government should be made responsible for the climate change.
Government is the authority who gives permissions to the industries and it has the responsibility to consider the sustainability of the environment before giving permissions to any industry or factory that degrades the environment. It has the power to make the law and control the industries or impose heavy fines on the them if they are crossing the limit of CO2 emissions. Therefore, I feel that the climate change should be owned by the government authorities.
On the other hand, there is a lot of controversy on the corruption allegations on government officers or agencies while giving clearance certificates for the establishment of the factories. Recently, there is a protest from group of people in Australia to stop the 1 billion dollar loan from the Government bank in India to mine the forest land. The protest even reached the cricket matches between India and Australia.
To conclude, Although the industries are the ones who cause the degradation to the environment, the governments have to act more authoritatively and responsibly in giving permissions to such industries and if needed, impose restrictions on such companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
...the industries or impose heavy fines on the them if they are crossing the limit of CO2 e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, therefore, while, i feel, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18747390921 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6331079859 50.4703680194 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.6 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289130213696 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109368671427 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713043284985 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172098428736 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077206851501 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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