University experience is more important than a university’s degree. Some people argue that university life is much more important than an educational degree in job market. Do you agree or not agree?
These days, there is an ongoing debate among the people about the importance of university experience over a university's degree in the job market. while it is possible to claim that university life plays a great role in job market then the educational degree, my view is that life in university outweight the educational degree. I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument.
there are several reasons why university experience is more important than a university's degree in job market. First and foremost, is knowledge. The university life gives knowledge in all aspects. For instance, A well-known American scientist Albert Einstein once said, "knowledge is the key to success". it is thus clear the importance of university experience in job market over university degree.
Further reinforcing, experience reason overweight the importance of university life over educational degree. Most of student study in university to gain experience. For example, an economic article reveals that 80% of university students attend university for practical experience. Without any doubt, it is clear that university life is more important than educational degree.
In capitulation, while people argue that university experience is much more important than university degree, i would strongly agree with the importance of university life than university degree.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62559241706 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15909396281 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 139.433497537 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497630331754 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.174482566 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3076923077 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.672388618635 0.242375264174 277% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.260186246281 0.0925447433944 281% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199172381143 0.071462118173 279% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.475637528856 0.151781067708 313% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112757146711 0.0609392437508 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 53.1260098522 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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