University tuition fees are increasing. Some argue that higher education should be made free. To what extent do you agree?
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the university tuition fees for higher education. there is a widespread worry that will only lead to myriads of concerns in a student's life as this will create financial challenges for talented students to get admission in these places. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and need to be considered.
there is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that hiking the fees in universities will not only limit the admission of skilled pupils to these institutions but also can lead to a technological crisis which in turn can cause serious harm to our economies. For instance, students who get admission in these universities by paying enormous fees may be exempted from their academic performances and those who come out in this way may not be professionally good enough.
On the other hand, there are some countries where the government aids academically high performing students to get into these universities by paying off their fees in terms of scholarships and stipends. For instance, a recent study undertaken by a famous university in London asserts that educational standards, as well as the number of skilled professionals of most of the European countries, have been increased drastically during the last decade as the governments started funding for students higher education. this also encourages more and more people towards education.
In view of the aforementioned statements, one can conclude that the increase in university fees has a major impact on the future generation. However, the government can take appropriate measures to make it viable for a common man.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20216606498 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10340834805 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5559566787 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.2428008566 50.4703680194 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136248617901 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509520414081 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465965033467 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831428523647 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188572538911 0.0609392437508 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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