The violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. people who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of violent movies on TV and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that these programs' effects are highly negative, such issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the violence programs increases crime in society, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin whit, there are various reasons to agree with the negative effects of violence on TV in society. At first, to prevent crime acts from teenagers the violence movies are good teacher for parents. However, these programs are harmful to kids and teenagers themselves. For example, by watching crime movies the kids learn how do as criminals such as thief and killing.
In addition, the violence programs on TV are highly fun and entertainment. But, they can run the crimes among people as an ordinary behavior. These movies should be divided for the different range of ages. For instance, a recent research scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2015 has shown that a significant number of bad effects on the society by classifying the movies for different ages.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that despite the entertainments whit violence programs and videos on TV , their drawbacks are far outweighed their benefits.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33628318584 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95367139956 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592920353982 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5404182734 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241820413161 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870455542412 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538912198035 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132640831071 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613460827822 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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