It is said that for some developed countries, tourism may cause some disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
In this day and age, there is a statement that tourism may cause some disadvantages for some developed countries. Although tourism industry regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by the public around the world, it can bring some negative effect to the society. For the purpose of this essay, I will analyze why I agree with this viewpoint.
To begin with, there are various reasons to agree to the existence of disadvantages of tourism. At first, tourism positively can develop the economy, but it can affect communities negatively. It can destroy indigenous traditions. For example, in many advanced countries, the traffic of foreign tourists influenced the behavior of natives such as clothing and eating.
In addition, despite the benefits of creating jobs by the tourism industry, it can make environmental issues for host communities. One of these problems is rubbished that spread by tourists on the environment. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by Tehran University researchers in 2016 has shown that a significant number of tourist countries involved with polluting the natural resources such as forests, coasts, and sea that are damaging natural sources.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that though the benefits of the tourism industry are far outweighed of its drawbacks, we cannot ignore this negatives that are very effective and costly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, while, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46666666667 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00299110148 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8170850508 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.818181818 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.25397266985 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227820790111 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861425934504 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902692384082 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131409835296 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100873693764 0.0609392437508 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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