in a war of ideas, it is people who get killed. does a common man suffer from a groups ideology?
express your opinion, and support the same with reasons and examples.
Recently, the phenomenon of the war of idea and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many personal attitudes is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the ideology can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From being biased standpoint, opposing ideologies can provide the society with noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that terrorism, as well as different point of view, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which deciphered religious view. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both different destruction of society can be seen.
Within the realm of innocent people, freedom of action might increase the consequences of the general public. Moreover, fundamental aspects of ideologist relate to this reality that the demerits of dogmatic person pertain to conflict of the idea. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertook by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of the proponent idea is correlated negatively with the opponent idea. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of social interaction.
To conclude, while three are several compelling arguments of both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of broadening of the idea far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of devastating ideology prove the significance of different thinking way, but also pinpoints of showing humanity implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... might increase the consequences of the general public. Moreover, fundamental aspects of ideol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56972111554 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20774783861 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657370517928 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3131127403 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0538537272408 0.242375264174 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0166159926278 0.0925447433944 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0226472297833 0.071462118173 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0291531008334 0.151781067708 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119174544737 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.86 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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