What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
Residing in urban or rural areas is entirely the decision of an individual. But, I believe that living in cities is more beneficial. Life in villages is restricted as the people have a backward thought process. However, this problem can be solved by educating the people. This essay will discuss merits of city life, drawbacks of rural areas and the solutions for the same.
To begin with the advantages of living in urban areas, cities provide better life facilities to the citizens. People can avail medical, education and leisure facilities within the same city and do not need to travel to faraway places to purchase the things that they want. Furthermore, people have better life opportunities in cities. They can get jobs ranging from labor to a Multinational Company post within the same area.
On the other hand, there are lots of problems that emerge when we reside in a village area. First of all, the thinking of rural citizens is very conservative. They not only restrict their lives but also do not allow other people to live their life with full freedom. Next, there is a scarcity of necessary facilities such as the hospital, schools, colleges, jobs in countryside areas.
Apparently, the problems of rural areas can be solved if younger generation educates the elderly. They should tell them about the recent advancements, ways of living and thinking of people. Slowly and gradually, it will change the mentality of the older generation. Other than this, the government can introduce more advancement in the villages, so the people do not have to look up to the cities for fulfilling their necessities.
In conclusion, rural as well as urban life comes up with its own set of benefits and drawbacks; however, the problems can be curbed with a little bit of optimism. People should reside in the area which they like the most.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 312.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94230769231 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66283470979 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9393299336 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1578947368 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.10526315789 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301225549076 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937913589155 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821439615159 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182134759671 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451474708973 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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