What is the best invention of the last 100 years, the computer, antibiotics, the aeroplane, and explain why?
Recently, the phenomenon of best inventions and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of traditional inventors is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that inventing antibiotics can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, the invention of the computer can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of technological improvement, as well as user-friendly devices, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the greatest invention of the last 20 years. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both modern technologies and industrial revolution apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, the invention of the aeroplane might increase the consequences of people's lifestyle. Moreover, fundamental aspects of medical inventions would relate to this reality that the demerits of providing social dissatisfaction pertain to life expectancy. As an example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of inventing electronic devices is correlated negatively with academic projects. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of useless inventions.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of useful inventions far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of inventing computer software prove the significance of modern medicines, but also pinpoint long-term implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
Recently, the phenomenon of best inventions and its corresponding impact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99612403101 5.00649968141 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.00426617338 2.71678728327 147% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662790697674 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.277169197 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.916666667 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123403117525 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039533423285 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307662316936 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676001314693 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00785922056523 0.0609392437508 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 12.6369458128 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.52 11.5310837438 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.17 8.32886699507 134% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 55.0591133005 193% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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