What is the best invention of last 100 years, the computer, antibiotics, the airplane, and explain why?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2515.0 1207.87684729 208% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 8.95017793594 5.00649968141 179% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 11.6662967977 2.71678728327 429% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 191.0 139.433497537 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679715302491 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 379.143842365 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.4 1.57093596059 153% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8979109293 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 209.583333333 104.977214359 200% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00450768864627 0.242375264174 2% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00445487880541 0.0925447433944 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0100389535268 0.071462118173 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00607898802572 0.151781067708 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105291161192 0.0609392437508 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.4 12.6369458128 256% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -19.55 53.1260098522 -37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.7 10.9458128079 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 34.93 11.5310837438 303% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.13 8.32886699507 134% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 55.0591133005 205% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.5123152709 209% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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