what is the best invention of last 100 years, the computer, antibiotics, the airplane and explain why.
Technological advancement has been a major revelation in the last 100 years. Technology has had rapid growth, especially in the last few decades.
Coming in that line, few of the inventions has been considered as the greatest achievements like Computers, antibiotics and aeroplanes. Each of the
above inventions has been the best in their own ways.
A computer is a reason behind many industries to grow like companies that are more data-oriented so computer makes the work easier and faster. It also
helps in storing heavy date for a long period of time. In so many ways that a computer has helped one particular industry gained the most of it which are the
Film industry. Cinema has grown tremendously with the help of computers as an entire movie is worked only with computers, without which movies wouldn't exist.
Aeroplanes and Antibiotics are two different categories where the latter has made travelling so easy that now people can reach to any part of the globe within hours
whereas those days ship travel was the only way which took weeks and months to reach any destination. Aeroplanes have reduced our time by a huge margin. On the other
hand, antibiotics are saving lives which is the most important of all. It has helped in curing diseases which previously has killed people in those days like a simple
fever.
Overall these 3 inventions have been changed the lives of people in their respective fields. It is important the people use it wisely not to misuse these
inventions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96062992126 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70630276358 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5356070713 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 7.25397266985 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.12807881773 242% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.079252448208 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332049122185 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560792882565 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.036816002903 0.151781067708 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564794032258 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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