Whether the design of the buildings will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?
Last century has saw a tremendous growth in the field of technology and innovation has proved that it brings a changes in the living style of people such as design of building. Nowadays, modern architects pay more attention towards sustainable design of building for the workers. this emerging trend gives rise another debate where some people think that it put positive impact on the workers, but others are not in favour of given statement. In my opinion, it has both positive and negative impact on person's life and numbers of arguments are discussed below.
At the outset, there are many reasons why design of building has positive impact on the workers, but most one conspicuous lies in the fact that if building of office or work place will well ventilated than worker would do well. Because it helps to improve the concentration of employees and put positive impact on the behaviour of workers. Therefore, well designed building helps to improve the productivity of goods.
Another key justification for upholding this notion is that if calm environment will not be provided to the workers than they do not focus on goals of which is fixed by the management. Hence, they cannot do desire goals.
Aforementioned view, it can concluded that design of building has positive and negative impact on workers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'conclude'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99543378995 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71540191506 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2066416595 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346315459509 0.242375264174 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125936684863 0.0925447433944 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867500246632 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203614134172 0.151781067708 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104349254279 0.0609392437508 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.