In developing countries, tourism has disadvantages or advantages.
In the era of technology, traditional view of traveling has changed as it makes traveling more easier and not past years. Nowadays, people are traveling to get break from their daily routine so, they can relax, enjoy and have fun. this growing trend has given rise to another debate where some people think that increased traveling put negative impact on the developing countries, but others are in favor of given statement. In my opinion latter view is right as travel has many advantage that dicusse below.
At the outset, there are many reasons why traveling has advantage for the developing countries, but the most one conspicuous lies in the fact that tourism industry known as green industry because when tourist travel from one country to another country that time they spend much money as they need special services such as five star hotels. In addition to, they also find tour guide because they want to watch scene worthy places. Consequently, country earn money from these visitors and it helps to raise the economy of the developing country.
Anonther key justification for upholding this notion is that travel and tourist industry is service sector which demand special services such as food. Hence, for appealing the visitors owners of hotels give job opportunities to the people so, it also helps to decline the unemployment rate in underdevelopment countries.
Aforementioned view, it can be concluded that it tourist industry has more advantage and not its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...eling has changed as it makes traveling more easier and not past years. Nowadays, people ar...
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Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...so, they can relax, enjoy and have fun. this growing trend has given rise to another...
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Line 1, column 475, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...nion latter view is right as travel has many advantage that dicusse below. At the outset, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14814814815 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6725472426 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59670781893 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.031659706 50.4703680194 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.1 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101912266238 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346578609815 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450081576429 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505871936159 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394265254177 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.5 Out of 90
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