Whether the design of the buildings will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?
From the inception of the time, human always try to improves their life and with the help of technology. Human is capable enough, to create the skyscrapper buildings. Architecture of mansions is providing a positive impact or negative is extremly contentious question and vary from person to person. This essay will ponder upon this topic with relevant supporting proofs.
There are myriads of example which is explaining that the design of a building can impose a positive impact on the mindset of everyone. The preponderant one is that beautiful color, modern furniture design are affecting the life and health of the person. Proper flow of air in home, sunlight, windy room help to use less electricity which not only reduce the usage electric items but also help to become a eco-friendly environment as well. However, home decorators can help anyone to create and design a building using the best methods. For example, some people believe in Vastu, which help to keep prosparity in home.
Nonetheless with the positive impacts, skyscrapper building is having their negative sides as well. It is possible that designer of building or architect can charge a huge amount for their services which can affect anyone pocket significantly. Person with physical problem can face different kind of problems, if he will buy a home without elevated or electornic life in multi-floor building. Moreover, in case of natural disasters like earthquake or heavy rain, high floor resident cannot take necessary steps in short span of time.
In conclusion, as pen above mention points, one can conclude that every coin has two sides. Technology helped the human to create beautiful buildings like Taj Mahal and Red Fort but not everyone can invest a million of dollars for show off.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'improve'.
Suggestion: improve
...eption of the time, human always try to improves their life and with the help of technol...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ctricity which not only reduce the usage electric items but also help to become a...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... electric items but also help to become a eco-friendly environment as well. Howev...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nonetheless,
...ich help to keep prosparity in home. Nonetheless with the positive impacts, skyscrapper ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in short, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13103448276 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69972474045 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613793103448 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1244119445 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21368018092 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692933806112 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659165214773 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113613947385 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530586529203 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 79.0 Out of 90
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