Whether parents should be held legally be responsible for children.
Since the beginning of the 21st century, raising a child with good ethics and value is a tough task for every parent. Some people believe that parents should be legally liable for children actions, while others argue that it is children who should be accountable for their own actions. This essay will discuss why parents should be legally responsible for their children behaviour.
Parents are children mentor and they have full control over the child. Children learn from parents about the moral ethics of life and follow their suggestions throughout their adult life. Recent research, which was conducted by Universiy of Sydney, has shown that 95% of Australian children are well behaved and follow the rule that is set by their family. Therefore, it seems clear that parents should be fully liable for their children acts.
On the other hand, some people think that children themselves must be responsible for their own acts, which can be a lesson for them after behaving in a certain way. For example, if children behave in a wrong manner and get legally punished for his or her action, that will make them think twice when attempting the second time. But people are unaware of the fact that children are innocent and they need time to learn to decide which is right and wrong. Thus, parents should always make sure that children behave in a right way, and if not parents should be answerable for their actions.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why parents should be fully responsible for their children acts. Therefore, In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that parents have the duty to look after their children and should be legally accountable for their actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong manner" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...d always make sure that children behave in a right way, and if not parents should be answerabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95070422535 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3431345899 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7072364105 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.504165702475 0.242375264174 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.236547339692 0.0925447433944 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155082881769 0.071462118173 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.38616813269 0.151781067708 254% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104613349714 0.0609392437508 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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