There is no doubt that it is becoming increasingly difficult to find trees. Some feel that the forest of buildings are the main cause of global warming while others feel that there are other pressing reasons for this. I am inclined to believe that there are numerous reasons that contribute significantly to this serious climate problem and will suggest ways to avoid it in this essay.
Without the rain forests, greenhouse gases become trapped in the atmosphere and indubitably contribute most to the rise in temperature. Environmental experts around the world have cited that deforestation is the major contributing factor to global warming along with the burning of fossil fuels. Evidently, our earth, although fairly young, have suffered a great deal as a result of these human activities. There is no part of the world that do not feel the corresponding impacts of global warming. These changes plunders people of their daily lifestyle and force us to make changes before it is really too late.
In my opinion, there are numerous ways to eradicate or to improve this current climate issues. One of the most conspicuous one would be to stop deforestation and start planting more trees. Additionally, people can switch from fossil fuels to renewable energy which would eliminate the release of harmful gases. Finally, we can choose public transportation or car-sharing to reduce our carbon footprints.
To conclude, deforestation along with the excessive burning of fossil fuels have contributed significantly to global warming. In order to prevent such problem from worsening, everyone would need to work together to play their part in making lifestyle changes.
- People should take part in sports either in individual or in teams, because people can learn many useful skills. How far do you agree? Explain and use examples or your own experience. 85
- The World is becoming a forest of the building. It is becoming difficult to find trees everywhere. What is the main reason for the global warming? Can you suggest ways, to eradicate global warming? 80
- Does a certain type of music affect young children's learning? Agree / Disagree ? 88
- Government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. Agree or disagree? 85
- What do you think are the strengths and weakness of the education system in your country Use your own experience to support your idea 90
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, really, so, while, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2734082397 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86857157579 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4706229158 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.571428571 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208334036697 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616374479014 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653228126969 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111480680023 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840512560298 0.0609392437508 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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