The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants for our planet and give the solution.
From the past few decades, worldwide people are facing lot of problems not only the people governments and organizations are also face a lot of problem with global warming. Global warming is the major problem to our planet. It rises the sea level, melts the polar ice, floods etc
The main cause of the global warming is green houses effect. These releases the more number of carbondioxde gases with effect the rise in heat in the environment, the other cause is by human deforestation is another main cause of global warming and using more number of fossil fuels. More number of cars are used so that, air pollution is occurred. Industries and factories emits the dangerous gases to the air by this industries air water are polluted. Another main reason for the global warming is population, as population increased the waste is also increased by this waste the land is polluted
There are some solutions to reduce global warming, but this is possible with everyone government and indivuials should take part in this, by reducing the use of fossil fuels, instead of usage of petelrolium products can go with another product which is eco-friendly. Stop cutting the tress, reduce the usage of natural resources, controlling the population
To conclude, global warming poses a serious problem to mankind, wildlife and eco system of the planet. Government and people should share equal responsibilities to overcome this problem and make the planet safer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07083333333 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70164558906 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.937018148 50.4703680194 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.222222222 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 7.25397266985 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130258136882 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616645695636 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692384719711 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092356677394 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750114005352 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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