Write about Climate change? who is responsible whether Government or industries?why
activities give peace and joyousness to people from their routine lifestyle. Most of us required a leisure activity time which allow to keep away from regular life pattern. Few people prefer arts and music as their fun time activity and other people prefer sports as an activity.
skydiving, motorcycle sports aren't dangerous activities if it performed under guidance and certain rules. The water river rafting, sky diving and motorcycle are one of the sports like other. it's very common to engage in such activities because it gives thrill to the participants and spectators. The motor sports have a huge fan base who actively participate in the races and many globally acclaimed competitions happen all over the world. The skydiving personally I like the sport because it gives me unprecedented energy when I do.
The sports could be also in danger and risky sport if it's not practiced in right way. before engaging in such sports one has to be aware of all the consequences and impacts of the sport if not performed in correctly. precautions measures should be taken before participating in the sport. The rules and conditions are followed strictly so that no worse situation happens. The skydiving and other risky sport needs more attention otherwise we are creating a situation where the performer and viewers are prone to difficulties.
Every sport has its own difficulties and level of danger. With all the proper precautionary measures and guidelines the sport should be supported so that it the sport still exist and safe to play.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Activities
activities give peace and joyousness to people fro...
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Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
...red a leisure activity time which allow to keep away from regular life pattern. Few peo...
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Suggestion: Skydiving
...ple prefer sports as an activity. skydiving, motorcycle sports arent dangerous acti...
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Suggestion: aren't
...ity. skydiving, motorcycle sports arent dangerous activities if it performed un...
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...certain rules. The water river rafting, sky diving and motorcycle are one of the sports li...
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...cycle are one of the sports like other. its very common to engage in such activitie...
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...e unprecedented energy when I do. The sports could be also in danger and risk...
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...port if its not practiced in right way. before engaging in such sports one has to be a...
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Suggestion: Precautions
...he sport if not performed in correctly. precautions measures should be taken before partici...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09803921569 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77581137627 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592156862745 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3151158803 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73333333333 7.25397266985 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0074594309166 0.242375264174 3% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00261618010087 0.0925447433944 3% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00978884959956 0.071462118173 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00436323333654 0.151781067708 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00755734182417 0.0609392437508 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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