Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in western countries. According to you what are the reasons or effects and what solution can be proposed by government and invidividuals?
The important effect of Xenophobia which was always debatable but has now become more controversial. The sustainable influence of Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in Western Countries has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on over the year. It can be said that in many countries, racism and Xenophobia are buried in the deep valley , but recently the number of such incidents have risen in western countries in the form of hate. In my opinion, both government and individual should work together to curb Xenophobia.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why Xenophobia have become so deeply ingrained in many people’s minds. However, I believe that problems arising from xenophobia and racism can be and will be resolved eventually, as South African president Nelson Mandela had declared: “No one is born for hating another because of his color, or his background, or religion.
On the other hand the government should organize awareness program and educate its citizen about different cultures, races and ethnicity. Secondly, government can encourage student-exchange programs where student from one country /race, should be shift to a different environment and for a temporary period would accept the difference .
From what we have discussed above, it can be concluded that impact of Xenophobia now is tough war to beat but together we all can make a difference and make our world a happy place.
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- Benefits of co-education 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34782608696 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.954558239 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647826086957 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1767694212 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25616330335 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909290741738 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370829410117 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133487185585 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567455126039 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.