Some environmentalists claim that people who drive cars do not have a right to complain about pollution since cars also pollute. What is your opinion?
Modern man has raised from bullock cart age to the computer era at a breakneck speed, accompanied by vast improvements in standards of living. But it has also created some problems, like pollution. Likewise, vehicles play a crucial role in pollution, so some people think that the people who drive the cars, they cannot complain about the pollution. I agree with this topic and discuss this topic and give my own opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, many people say that people should do more and more use of public vehicles like buses and trains, that will help in decreasing the pollution rate. Moreover, it will also improve their communication skills, because they will gett chance to meat with other people, due to which will increase their knowledge about ethical values. Furthermore, it will also save the fossil fuels so that, which are necessary for the human live.
Apart from this, if most people will travel in public transport, then it will also improve the economy of the country, due to which nation will well developed in all all fields like construction work and all government employees will get good income of their work due to this they can live luxurious life. Besides this, now all individuals are very busy in their works, by dint of they can meet with other people, but when they will travel in buses or trains, then they can make good relationships with others.
In conclusion, it can be said that people should solve this problem, debate with each other. So that, government should also participate finding the solution to demolish the pollution, like they should provide many facilities in the public transport, due to which population will attract towards the mean of government vehicles.
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- Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are role models for youngsters. Do you support it or not? 80
- Some people think that laws change human behavior, do you agree or disagree. 84
- PARENTS SHOULD BE HELD LEGALLY RESPONSIBLE FOR THEIR CHILDREN’S ACT. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: all
... to which nation will well developed in all all fields like construction work and all g...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 6.10837438424 327% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94845360825 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50187870034 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7473599133 50.4703680194 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.909090909 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104038511719 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506382323191 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534487042617 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721639809541 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522813386107 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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