You are given climate as the field of study. Which area will you prefer? Explain why you picked up the particular area of your study?
Nowadays, the climate issues have become a long-running dispute among the public all around the world, which I tend to choose global warming as an international crisis.
From an environmental point of view, the climate changes are indeed bound up tightly with environmental issues, which means it might lead to both air pollution and sea level rises. For example, a group of profound environmentalists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to establish the relationship between factories and dangerous pollutants. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that the studying environmental reforms are correlated negatively with not only environmental changes but also harmful contaminants.
In medical terms, global warming is attributable to fatal diseases, in that it would lead to incurable cancers, pateints, and hospitals. A well-known example of such attributions is the increase in lung cancers, which is cause for concern since they had been mistaken to take medicines for granted. Thus, globa warming could play an imperative role in increasing deaths and diseases.
To recapitulate, I tend to think that global issues are of significance. However, as evry garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
- The information revolution has changed the ways of mass communication andhas some negative and positive effects on individual’s lives as well as onsociety. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 88
- The mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people’s ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer. 77
- The university will deduct the students' score for late assignments. Opinion and solutions? 85
- In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why? 11
- Medical technology is responsiblefor the human's life expectancy. Towhat extent do you agree ordisagree? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 42, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...owadays, the climate issues have become a long-running dispute among the public all around the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68115942029 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29510388782 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690821256039 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1168381076 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0553276361319 0.242375264174 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.018947032963 0.0925447433944 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0206995229935 0.071462118173 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0288228983006 0.151781067708 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232494774228 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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