The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate local produced food. What extent do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Nowadays, local produce food has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the world, which leads to a moot question "is it advantageous?" Although some people argue that the disadvantages of local food are more, I tend to believe that the merits of it are more.
From an economic terms, local produce is indeed bound up tightly with economic growth, which leads to both resanable price food products and high employment rate. For example, a group of reputable economists, working at prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relation ship between agricultural products and farmers as well as socio-economic conditions. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that economic issues are correlated positively with not only consumers but also agriculture.
In environmental terms, local produced foods are undoubtedly attributable to using fossil fuels, in that they would lead to air pollution, carbon emissions, and long distances. A well-known example of such attributions is food exports, which are cause for concern since they had been mistaken to take impoted local food for granted. Had they protected natural resources in advance, it might have had the opportunity to preserve the environment. Thus, local produce could play a significant role in preserving the environment.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the advantages of local prouced foods far outweigh its drawbacks. However, as every garden may have some weeds, local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict regulatios, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...Nowadays, local produce food has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.625 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17721210639 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661290322581 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0824841786 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.5 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226372700048 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824337582456 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637680117204 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134165988944 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507682522778 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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