In some countries around the world, voting is compulsory.Do you agree with the notion of compulsory voting?If it is compulsory in a democratic society, what conclusions can we draw about ‘Nature of democracy?’
Nowadays, mandatory voting has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the world, which leads to a moot question "should it be compulsory?" Although some people think voting should be mandatory, I tend to belive the opposite.
From political point of view, compulsory voting is indeed bound up tightly with dictators, which it might lead to both political reforms and policy changes. For example, a group of profound politicians, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to establish the relationship between political issues and political spectrum as well as democracy. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that the majority of citizens are correlated positively not only with democrats but also republicans.
In social terms, democracy is undoubtedly attributable to liberty, in that it would lead to freedom, social changes, and governments. A well-known example of such attributions is political systems, which is cause for concern since they had been mistaken to take votes for granted. Had they provided humans with rights in advance, they might have had the opportunity to support political campaigns. Thus, democracy could play an imperative role in protecting human rights.
To recapitulate, I entirely disagree with mandatory voting. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... Nowadays, mandatory voting has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70666666667 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16906030392 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688888888889 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8362785293 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.4 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181345203152 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573617750856 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623280618092 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104463634398 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718708307086 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 11.5310837438 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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